I made this
Good first attempt!
My recommendation would be to work on the lighting or render settings some more because for a night scene, many surface look to bright or not illuminated currently.
If you upload a blender file, we could take a look.
Nice! It's really similar to the one I made
Thanks, but I can't see the one you made in the link
https://lemmy.world/pictrs/image/e20f1d65-01c2-48bb-bb17-803205bd741a.jpeg
That one?